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Tuesday, February 1, 2011

Little Bits of Fiction 2

The following stories were written for storypraxis, a literary experiment which involves writing for 10 minutes, or so, on daily word prompts.

arrival
by Lydia Trecroce (1/25/11)

Like Pavlovian puppies they anticipated its arrival, observing the signs of its coming. Taking their cue from a rolling-down sun, children prodded balls and bicycles homeward. Mothers set dinners on tables, while the sky tucked around their roofs, vivid as an Indian blanket. Clocks and Fathers wound down. Because of what would come, children obeyed and ate their green beans.

It began as a tinkling, a fairy awakening in the distance. The heart of every boy and girl trilled, yet some found the bell’s appeal confounding their decisions. Too soon for the adults, the delicate song grew in length, strength, nearness. Fathers could not empty their pockets quickly enough. Small bare feet hit the floor running.

Out to the street the kids dashed. They formed jagged lines. They licked ready lips. One by one, the children—who’d endured much to receive this privilege—offered up orders and quarters at the marvelous ice temple on wheels.


dancing in my head
by Lydia Trecroce (1/8/11)

Carlson Patrick received many things in the state penitentiary, and his scarred body testified of this. But the last item he received was different. As he entered the courtyard of the prison, he noticed, for the first time, the gritty dust tamped hard by the heavy tread of the hopeless. That’s us, he thought, was me. But not anymore. Carlson surveyed the unyielding walls surrounding him. His gaze rose above the electrified wire to the bright winter sky. Above his head, white-robed clouds floated pure and free. A multitude of positive emotions coursed through Carlson at once, and he almost short-circuited. The buzz Carlson felt was infinitely greater than anything he’d experienced getting laid or high. A glance at the toughs in the yard checked his impulse to break out in a jig. Carlson spied his pals Rufus, Doc and The Kid crouching in the shadow of the building from where he’d emerged. Cigarette break by cigarette break, they ticked off the days of their life sentences. Carlson used to do this too, until late last night. Kneeling by his bunk in the dark, he’d opened his heart to the Supreme Judge. Today, he would tell his buddies how he’d been pardoned.


castle
by Lydia Trecroce (1/12/11)

Ms. Reynolds pointed to a tan puddle on the floor of the office kitchenette. “Deke, would you get this please? Thanks.” The woman lifted her high-heeled foot and, like a dog with a wet paw, she shook it daintily. Then she stepped over the spilled coffee and shot through the doorway, crumbling the janitor’s reply in her wake.

“No problem, ma’am.” Deke knotted the neck of his trash bag and went for his mop. He was accustomed to people ignoring his words. All his life, he’d been the one to heed the words of others. In his youth, naturally he’d obeyed the commands of his parents and his teachers. After that and up to the present, he served an entire corporation of individuals, most of whom, now, were decades younger than himself.

Empty trashcans, clean toilets, mop and polish floors—Deke labored without a word of complaint. Often, people took advantage of him, diverting him from an assigned chore to cater to their personal needs. Adjust lamps, fetch supplies, procure insect repellent (?)—no one, including the janitor, seemed to know the boundary that separated servitude from slavery. But it didn’t matter anyway, because Deacon Jones knew in his heart he was a king.

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As soon as Deke stepped through the doorway of his home, Queen Edna quit chopping vegetables and embraced him. Deke believed no ermine robe could feel finer on his aching body than his wife’s plump arms. “Hi Daddy!” shrieked Princess Lily running to the fridge. After pouring a tall goblet of his favorite lemon ambrosia, the little girl set the drink into the king’s chapped hands, anointing them with many tiny kisses. Prince Deacon Jr. brought the royal slippers. The boy gladdened his father’s heart with reports of his scholarly triumphs. In the sweet half hour before the feast, Deke settled into his La-Z-Boy throne and meditated on the abundance of his riches.

Thursday, April 29, 2010

Taking a Break

Hi there! First, let me apologize for my sudden and lengthy disappearance from this blog. I'm so sorry. I should have posted sooner. After a highly eventful summer (and way too much to write about), I decided to give this blog a rest and concentrate on finishing up some projects. I'm still working on those projects, and I don't know when I'll be back. If you're a new visitor, please feel free to wander around, check out back posts (scroll down to the bottom of the page) and enjoy the photos.

I'm glad you stopped by. All the best to you!

photo: Yangshuo, China 2009 by A. Tsirozidis

Friday, March 20, 2009

To Love, Honor and Transport

Most neighborhoods in Greece are cluttered with a variety of shops, so it's possible to get what you need on foot. This is how my mother-in-law shopped until an inflamed nerve in her thigh grounded her. Like a good husband, my father-in-law saw that his wife's problem was his problem too. He needed to drive her around. But how? Heavy traffic and almost non-existent parking dissuaded him from using his car. He solved the dilemma by treating himself to a new toy. The funny-looking "roofed scooter" in the above photo belongs to my 79-year-old father-in-law.

Before they were married, Peter's dad courted his mom on a Harley-Davidson motorcycle with a sidecar. So, Peter loves the irony of the scooter. He sees the history of his parents' wheels as having come full circle (no pun intended).

I asked my mother-in-law how she liked her new mode of transportation. Her reply: "I'd much rather ride in the car."

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Quips passed on to me:


Troubles in marriage often start when a man gets so busy earning his salt that he forgets his sugar.

Too many couples marry for better or for worse, but not for good

When a man marries a woman, they become one - but the trouble starts when they try to decide which one

If a man has enough "horse sense" to treat h is wife like a thoroughbred, she will never be an old nag

Judging from the specimens they pick for husbands, It's no wonder that brides often blush

On anniversaries the wise husband always forgets the past - but never the present

A foolish husband remarks to his wife: "Honey, you stick to the washing, ironing, cooking, and scrubbing. No wife of mine is going to work."

The bonds of matrimony are a good investment only when the interest is kept up

Whether a man winds up with a nest egg or a goose egg depends a lot on the kind of chick he marries.

Many girls like to marry a military man - he can cook, sew, make beds, is in good health...and he's already used to taking orders.

Grandpa and his wife were discussing their 40th wedding anniversary when she said: "shall I kill a chicken for tonight?" "Gnaw," said Grandpa, "Why blame a bird for something that happened 40 years ago

the wife has the last word in any argument. anything the man says after that starts a new argument.

A husband should always maintain a close, friendly relationship with his mother and father in law; they are the only ones who can keep his wife in her proper place.

Monday, March 16, 2009

Over the Hill and Gliding Home

Some benefits of being 50+:

1. A. You finally understand everyone is flawed and you can't change anyone but yourself.
B. You find it much easier to love and accept each individual, including yourself.

2. A. You have a heightened sense that time is running out.
B. You no longer sweat the little things.

3. A. You realize there isn't one problem that doesn't have a solution.
B. You've become more optimistic, more patient.

4. A.You don't take yourself half as seriously as you once did.
B. Laughter comes more easily.

5. A. Most of the major brush strokes you will lay on the canvas of your life have dried.
B. You're freer to linger over the finer details.


photo: Cyclist on Mt. Hymmetus by L. Trecroce

Sunday, March 15, 2009

We have a winner!

The result of the drawing for last month's featured book giveaway is in. I asked my husband to do the honors, so he stuck his hand into the baseball cap and drew out a slip of paper with one of the contestants' names written on it. I'm pleased to announce the winner of Amy Deardon's thrilling action-adventure novel, A Lever Long Enough, is Vicki Pappas. Congratulations, Vicki!

A Lever Long Enough is available through Amazon, here.
Autographed copies of the book are available at the publisher's website, here.

Friday, March 13, 2009

A Friend in a High Place

"He that is slow to anger is better than the mighty; and he that ruleth his spirit than he that taketh a city. The lot is cast into the lap; but the whole disposing thereof is of the LORD." -Proverbs 16:32,33

Let me tell you about my lot and how the Lord neatly disposed of it. Remember the trouble I had, a few months ago, when I went to renew my residence permit? Remember how I grumbled because there seemed to be no way out of paying a hefty, hugely unfair fine? (I'm too ashamed to link you back to that post.) Yesterday, I picked up my new residence card and I ended up paying NOTHING. Not a cent! I don't know how the Lord worked things out, but He did. The town hall clerk, the one who'd previously shown no sympathy, handed me my card, smiled sweetly, and told me that was it. I couldn't believe my ears! But then, what's not to believe? With God, all things are possible.

This was one of the many lessons God has taught me about trusting in Him with all of my heart. Maybe one of these days, I'll wise up.
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"Trust in the LORD with all thine heart; and lean not unto thine own understanding.In all thy ways acknowledge him, and he shall direct thy paths." Proverbs 3:5,6

photo: Cypress on Mt. Hymettus by L. Trecroce

Tuesday, March 3, 2009

Clean Monday on Philopappou Hill


Yesterday Greeks celebrated Kathari Deftera or Clean Monday, their first day of lent. Traditionally on this holiday, people trek to the nearest hills with their families, fly kites and picnic on special foods. (You can see & read all about the unusual dishes here in my post from last year). Everyone relaxes, enjoys the fresh air and has a good time.

No matter how bad the weather has been previously, Clean Mondays always seem to dawn miraculously clear and mild. Peter and I took advantage of the spring-like day to climb Philopappou Hill--the hill next to the Acropolis. The following photos capture a bit of the festivities we found there.

The Athens "magic" tour bus. Psychedelic, man.


The guests of honor.

Getchyer hot popcorn and "old lady's hair" (cotton candy)!


Opa!

Philopappou's summit. It was dangerous up there with all those kites! Poor Peter got hit in the head by one on its way down.

Free as a butterfly on a string.


All photos property of Lydia Trecroce. Do not use without permission.

Thursday, February 26, 2009

Wisdom & Chuckles

Here are some oldies but goodies (in no particular order):

Artificial intelligence is no match for natural stupidity.

A person who is nice to you but rude to the waiter is not a nice person.

For every action, there is an equal and opposite government program.

Bills travel through the mail at twice the speed of checks.

Don't worry about what people think; they do it very often.

Going to church doesn't make you a Christian anymore than standing in a garage makes you a car.

A conscience is what hurts when all of your other parts feel so good.

Eat well, stay fit, die anyway.

Men are from earth. Women are from earth. Deal with it.

No man has ever been shot while doing the dishes.

Middle age is when broadness of the mind and narrowness of the waist change places.

Junk is something you've kept for years and throw away three weeks before you need it.

By the time you can make ends meet, they move the ends.

The most destructive force in the universe is hatred.

Your friends love you anyway.

Never be afraid to try something new. Remember that a lone amateur built the Ark. A large group of professionals built the Titanic.

Photo: "Tortoise in Camden Aquarium," by L. Trecroce

Tuesday, February 17, 2009

Author Interview & Book Giveaway

Wouldn't it be thrilling to visit Jerusalem at the time of Jesus' resurrection? Friend and author Amy Deardon takes the old idea of time travel and gives it a new twist in her stunning debut novel, A Lever Long Enough.

Not usually a fan of action adventure stories, I was blown away by Amy's masterful plot and meticulous attention to detail. She dovetails the awe-inspiring history of the first century with the chilling technology of latter times for a fast-paced, action-packed suspense. As a friend of mine remarked, after swiping the novel from me and devouring it in one night, "A Lever Long Enough would make a terrific movie!"

Okay, here's Amy now. Be sure to stick around to find out how you can win an autographed copy of this book.

Amy, tell us a little about yourself.


I’m married and fortunate enough to be able to stay at home with our two children, now 15 and 12. In my life B.C. (before children) I did bench science research and taught anatomy and physiology at an undergraduate level.

I undertook a personal quest to investigate the claims of Jesus’ resurrection with the goal of destroying them. To do this I studied biblical and extra-biblical accounts of Jesus and numerous commentaries by believers and skeptics alike, listed the facts agreed upon, and began to explore scenarios that could explain what was known. To my surprise and considerable dismay, the evidence kept pointing away from naturalistic explanations and eventually formed a virtually certain case for the resurrection of Jesus. Finally I admitted defeat and became a Christian.



What is your book about?

In the near future, the Israeli military has developed a prototypic time machine. When believers in Yeshua (Jesus) create a politically explosive situation that threatens the balance of peace between Israel and nearby countries, the Israelis must send a team of four elite soldiers back to film the theft of Jesus’ body from the tomb and thus disprove Christianity. The team, consisting of a Special Forces soldier as leader (Benjamin), an ex-American astronaut as engineering specialist (Sara), an archaeologist, and a linguist, has exactly seventy-two hours to collect the video evidence. Drawn into a web of first century deception and death, the only way to escape is for the team to change the past. In the present, a traitor, Gideon, attempts to sabotage the mission and seize control of the military complex. Benjamin is the only one who can reveal him, but he is trapped two thousand years away. Even with a time machine, time is running out…

Which character in your novel most interested you while you wrote?

I love all of my characters, but if I had to choose a favorite, I’d pick Sara. She is very much like me—focused, quiet, but beneath her calm exterior a seething mass of turmoil. Her faith journey also parallels my own—she didn’t want to become a believer, but was pulled in by the strength of the evidence. She was pursued by what C.S. Lewis termed the *Hounds of Heaven.* An uncomfortable process, I might add!

What are you working on now?

I have two half-finished projects that I’m eager to complete in 2009 – an ambitious yet hopefully do-able goal, if I’m very organized. The first project is my prequel, entitled Nest Among the Stars from Obadiah 1:4, that follows Sara’s space station disaster. This one is really shock and awe, with a deep theme of forgiveness.

The second project is nonfiction, entitled The Story Template, that is a practical guide for a writer to develop a resonant, complete, compelling story from vague ideas. It’s based on an algorithm I’ve developed during my story studies, and with students I’ve coached it really works. It’s not a formula, more like a description of proportions and guidelines that work with any genre, since I’m a great believer in the uniqueness of each artist’s vision. You can see a sample tutorial I’ve put on my website under “resources.”

I've used your Story Template to map out my second novel. What I like about it is, compared to other "systems", it's easy to follow and it works! So, thank you for sharing that on your website.

Tell me, Amy, have you always wanted to be an author?


Oh yes, although it’s a daunting thing when you actually sit in front of the computer and think, “Now what shall I write?”

Which author has inspired you the most?

C.S. Lewis. He has an amazing mind, and he draws such wonderful metaphors.

Do you have any advice for aspiring authors?

Yes. Don’t expect to produce perfect prose off the bat – just as you wouldn’t expect to play a Beethoven Sonata for your first piano lesson. Just believe in yourself, and persist.

Amy, thanks so much for spending time with us today, and blessings on A Lever Long Enough. I look forward to your future books.

Reader, if you're interested in entering the drawing for an autographed copy of A Lever Long Enough, please submit a comment to this post. The winner will be chosen & announced on March 15th.

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For more on this author, go to: http://www.amydeardon.com or http://amydeardon.blogspot.com

Saturday, February 14, 2009

The Burning Heart

Inspired by what I read in Luke 24 of the Bible this morning, I decided to do a special Valentine's Day study of the heart. I wanted to examine the heart beyond its function as a bodily organ, so I began by taking a look at these definitions from Dictionary.com:

Heart

3. the center of the total personality, esp. with reference to intuition, feeling, or emotion: In your heart you know I'm an honest man.
4. the center of emotion, esp. as contrasted to the head as the center of the intellect: His head told him not to fall in love, but his heart had the final say.
5. capacity for sympathy; feeling; affection: His heart moved him to help the needy.
6. spirit, courage, or enthusiasm: His heart sank when he walked into the room and saw their gloomy faces.
7. the innermost or central part of anything: Notre Dame stands in the very heart of Paris.
8. the vital or essential part; core: the heart of the matter.
9. the breast or bosom: to clasp a person to one's heart.
10. a person (used esp. in expressions of praise or affection): dear heart.

In the passage of scripture I read today, two of Jesus' disciples are walking from Jerusalem to the village of Emmaus. It's the third day since Jesus has died and been buried, and the disciples are sad. They're walking along, talking about the events of the past few days, when who should join their little road trip, but Jesus! He disguises Himself and asks them why they're sad. What He's really doing is testing their faith.

The disciples, thinking Jesus is a newcomer to Jerusalem, tell Him all about "the mighty prophet" (already, they've begun to doubt Jesus is God). "He was condemned to death and crucified," they say. Knowing scripture and the prophecy of His resurrection, they add with disappointment, "Beside all this, today is the third day since these things were done."

They go on to tell Jesus some of His disciples found His tomb empty and saw angels, who testified that He is alive. Yet, the travelers still doubt, saying, "but him they (the other disciples) saw not."

Like most humans, they "have to see it to believe it."

IMHO, eyesight is highly overrated when it comes to seeing. There are other ways to "see". As Jesus demonstrates in the story, the eyes of faith are in the heart.

Beginning at Moses and all the prophets, Jesus explains to the travelers all the things concerning Himself in the scriptures. He reveals Himself through scripture, just as He does today. The disciples realize this later, because they say to each other, "Did not our heart burn within us, while he talked with us by the way, and while he opened to us the scriptures?"

In addition to being a life-giving organ for our carnal bodies, the heart has great spiritual purpose. The muscle in our chests can only keep us alive for so long. The burning intuitive heart, when submitted to God, leads to righteousness and life everlasting.

"That if thou shalt confess with thy mouth the Lord Jesus, and shalt believe in thine heart that God hath raised him from the dead, thou shalt be saved. For with the heart man believeth unto righteousness; and with the mouth confession is made unto salvation." Romans 10:9,10

(Comments are most welcomed. However, any comments containing derogatory statements made toward the author and her readers will be deleted. Please be courteous.)

Friday, February 6, 2009

Life Outside the Goldfish Bowl

Some random musings.

First of all,
Sorry for the dearth of posts these days. I attribute that to 2 things:

1. Something is wrong with my camera or its cable. Until I locate and fix the problem, I can't upload any fresh pics. Bummer!

2. I was busy finishing up novel #2, which I did a few days ago (Feb 2nd). Hooray! Now I'm working on the rewrites. This is the fun part for me. I love fleshing out my story skeleton. One aspect of the filling-in process is visiting the locations where different scenes take place. Peter and I will motorcycle to the farther reaches of Chios and Evvia Islands in early summer. Tomorrow, in the name of research :) we plan to have coffee at a Starbucks in the center of the city, and then ride up to the summit of Mt. Hymettus. Sounds like a fun thing to do on a Saturday, right?

For a shy gal like me, asserting myself for the sake of my stories has been a good experience. Yesterday, I walked into the Athens Hilton and asked an executive there to show me around their meeting rooms. I explained that I was a novelist, researching a setting, but for some reason he expected I would actually book a convention there in the future! Well, you never know. Maybe my novel will hit it big and I'll need a place to hold a press conference. A girl can dream, can't she? Anyway, Mr. K. the Hilton exec was very patient, answering my questions and waiting for me to scribble down descriptions of the rooms. I ended my tour in the hotel's famed Byzantine Restaurant, where my two characters eat lunch. Here's the difference between fact and fiction: My characters eat a meal; I could only afford iced tea.

About the photo above: No, I didn't paint it, although I wish I had. Goldfish was painted by one of my favorite artists, Henri Matisse. His cut paper work especially inspired me. You can see his influence in one of my silkscreens, Taverna Chairs with Cat. A reproduction of Goldfish hangs in my living room. I chose the print because the colors match my decor, but mainly because it's fun to look at.

Monday, January 26, 2009

Beholding Beauty

The street musician, dressed in a long-sleeved T-shirt and baseball cap, begins to play his nearly-300-year-old Stradivari in the arcade of a Washington DC metro station.

The music irritates the shoe shine lady, who works in the arcade, because it’s too loud and she can’t hear her customers. She usually calls the metro or mall cops to come chase the street performers away. Since this violinist is “pretty good”, for once, she makes an exception.

The violinist plays for three minutes. Sixty-three people scurry by before a middle-aged man pauses to listen. Then he hurries away. Although the violinist is, in his own words, “makin’ a lot of noise”, people in line for lottery tickets, a hundred feet away, do not even turn to look at him. He passionately performs one of the most intricate pieces of music ever written, yet no crowd forms. There is no applause.

A couple of minutes into his next song, a woman and her preschooler emerge from a nearby escalator. The woman walks briskly, tugging the child along. The little boy wants to stop and listen to the musician. He keeps turning back to look at him. But the mother is in a hurry, so she discourages her son by blocking his view with her body.

During the violinist’s forty-three minute performance, 1,070 people, many as close as three feet away, pass him by as if oblivious to his presence. One guy, sporting an iPod, denies the musician being there at all, although he has just passed within four feet of him. A total of only six people stop to listen to the violinist for at least a minute.

The violinist is concluding his solo, when a woman stops and listens in awe. She recognizes the performer and she's appalled that people toss him quarters, even pennies! She adds a twenty-dollar bill to his earnings of $32.17. Hard to know what to give an international virtuoso whose formal concerts sell out, seats averaging $100.

The violinist is the world-renowned Joshua Bell, and his incognito appearance in the metro station was organized by the Washington Post as part of a social experiment about perception, taste and priorities. The premise was: In a commonplace environment at an inappropriate hour: Do we perceive beauty? Do we stop to appreciate it? Do we recognize talent in an unexpected context?” (For more details, read the Washington Post article and view the video clips at: Pearls Before Breakfast).

A writer for the Post watched the speeded up videotape of the experiment and called it “a grim danse macabre to indifference, inertia and the dingy, gray rush of modernity.”

The story is indeed a sad commentary on humanity today. It's pitiful when we allow the momentum of our routines to render us immune to the unexpected beauty in life. Sadder still is when, in the rush to our deaths, we ignore God's presence, tune out His voice, and pass up all the wonderful things He freely gives, including eternal life.

"Be still, and know that I am God:" Psalm 46:10

Friday, January 23, 2009

Cheese Sandwiches

Here's a cute, true story:

There was an immigrant family on a ship from Europe to American. They were so poor they spent almost all of their money on the ticket. What they had left over for food was only enough to buy bread and cheese.

The young boy, Hans, said to his father, "Dad, please give me some money for an ice cream cone. I hate these cheese sandwiches!"

His father said, "Son, we are poor. Cheese sandwiches will keep you alive until we reach New York, where the streets are made of gold and we will eat whatever we want."

Not satisfied, Hans continued to beg for money. Finally, his father gave him change for an ice cream cone. The boy disappeared and didn't come back for two hours. When he returned he sported a big fat tummy and a huge smile on his face.

"Hans, did you get your ice cream cone?"

"You bet, Dad. And then another one, then a steak, and then apple pie."

"What? You bought all that with the money I gave you?"

"Oh no Dad, it's free! It comes with the ticket!"

***

Spiritually, we're on a journey like these immigrants--except, we seek a place where the streets are truly paved with gold. Some of us, like Hans's parents, keep to ourselves and what we know, ignorant or misinformed as we might be. We exist on cheese sandwiches, when there's a full feast waiting for us between the pages of the Bible.

In John 6:35 Jesus Christ says, "I am the Bread of Life; he who comes to me shall not hunger, and he who believes in me shall never thirst."


Friday, January 16, 2009

Log Lines

As so often happens in my writing life, last night I was seized with doubt when I began typing one of the final chapters to the first draft of my current novel. Was I veering off course again? I pulled out my story structure template (waving to Amy) and rough Snowflake (Randy) and took a look at my log line.


A log line, sometimes called the pitch line or premise, summarizes a story in one sentence. Log lines keep a writer focused, and are necessary to have when people—from editors and agents to family & friends--ask what the story is about.


Sound simple? It wasn’t for me, at first. No matter how much time I spent on my log line, I was never satisfied with the wording of it. I decided to study this deeper, and see what examples I could find online. In my search, I discovered a wonderfully helpful article by Christopher Lockhart entitled I Wrote a 120 Page Script but Can’t Write a Logline: The Construction of a Logline.


About a log line, he says:


“It presents the major throughline of the dramatic narrative without character intricacies and sub-plots. It is the story boiled down to its base. A logline must present:


who the story is about (protagonist)

what he strives for (goal)
what stands in his way (antagonistic force)


Okay, that I knew. He goes on to say:


“Sometimes a logline must include a brief set-up. A logline does not tell the entire story. It merely uses these three (sometimes four) major story elements to depict the dramatic narrative in an orderly and lucid manner.


“Screenplays ask dramatic questions throughout the course of the story. These questions create tension and motivate the reader to turn to the next page. A logline does the same thing in miniature: it raises questions that evoke curiosity and stir up potentiality.


“A good logline (like the screenplay itself) should boast a story that is not dependent on its ending. Providing too much information in a logline can backfire by giving the executive more information in which to find fault. A brief but well constructed logline should tease and raise many questions to successfully pique the interest of the executive.” He also advises against using theme in the logline.


Amy Deardon, in her story structure template, calls the log line a “zinger” and says it should include irony if possible. (See if you can spot irony in the examples below)


Note: A log line is not to be confused with a tag line, which is a catchphrase used in advertising. Ex: JAWS II: “Just when you thought it was safe to go back into the water…”doesn't tell what the story's about.


Once I learned what makes a good log line, I decided, before boiling down my own story, I’d practice on some of my recent reads and old favorites. Stories I don’t have on hand or couldn’t remember well, I looked up on IMDb to get the log lines of their movie versions. These are noted.


I’m the type of person who needs a lot of examples to learn something, so my list is pretty long. Anyway, it was a fun exercise. I hope the following list will be useful to you as a writer, or even as a reader looking for a book you haven’t read.


Three by Ted Dekker: A brilliant but naïve seminary student searches his painful past for the confession demanded by a mysterious killer.


Turtle Moon by Alice Hoffman: Under the oppressive heat of Florida in May, a gutsy divorcee teams up with a reticent cop to find her runaway son and her neighbor’s murderer.


Girl with a Pearl Earring by Tracy Chevalier: A young maid with an aesthetic eye is hired to work for the wife of painter Johannes Vermeer but becomes his talented assistant and the model for one of his most famous works.


A Lever Long Enough by Amy Deardon: “A small military team travels back in time to film the theft of Jesus' body from the tomb.” (log line by the author).


Bel Canto by Ann Patchett: South American guerrillas invade a party at a government mansion and the prolonged captivity of their notable hostages produces surprising results.


Ladder of Years by Anne Tyler: A restless 40-year-old, feeling unappreciated by her husband and nearly-grown children, wanders off during a family vacation and starts a new life in a small town.


The Kite Runner by Khaled Hosseini: Amid the horrors invading his homeland, a wealthy Afghani boy moves from a close friendship with the son of his father’s servant to betrayal, and then to the hope of redemption in adulthood.


The Bonesetter’s Daughter by Amy Tan: A Chinese-American has a manuscript of her mother’s translated, and as the elderly woman slips into dementia, the daughter learns the truth about her mother’s past in China.


The Count of Monte Cristo by Alexandre Dumas: “A young man, falsely imprisoned by his jealous "friends," escapes and uses a hidden treasure to exact his revenge.” (IMDb)


The Secret Life of Bees by Sue Monk Kidd: A young girl's search for the truth about her dead mother leads her to three beekeeping sisters, the mesmerizing world of bees, and a mysterious Black Madonna.


To Kill a Mockingbird by Harper Lee: “In 1930’s Georgia, a young girl learns about racism when her lawyer father defends a black man falsely accused of rape.” (?)


The Assistant by Bernard Malamud: An Italian-American drifter is forced to re-examine his moral and spiritual beliefs when he falls in love with the daughter of his employer, the Jewish storekeeper he secretly robbed.


My Antonia by Willa Cather: The tale of a spirited, young Bohemian immigrant striving to make good in the untamed land of late 19th century Nebraska, as told through the eyes of her childhood friend.


The Life of Pi by Yann Martel: The spiritually-minded son of an Indian zookeeper struggles to survive and find land after he ends up in a lifeboat with a Bengal tiger.


The Member of the Wedding by Carson McCullers: A stubborn adolescent, longing at once for escape and belonging, dreams of joining her older brother and his bride-to-be in their new life together.


The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time by Mark Haddon: An autistic teen accused of killing his neighbor’s dog goes on an odyssey to track down the killer.


The Shipping News by E. Annie Proulx: An emotionally-beaten man moves with his young daughters to his ancestral Newfoundland home to reclaim his life. (IMDb)


The Lovely Bones by Alice Sebold: From the vantage point of heaven, a young girl observes her family, friends, community and killer in the aftermath of her murder.


Feel free to share the log line of your story, make up one for a favorite book, or try a humorous version like Richard Polito’s log line for The Wizard of Oz:

"Transported to a surreal landscape, a young girl kills the first woman she meets, then teams up with three complete strangers to kill again."